untitled for now(Pg 13 i guess.typos!)

[-Irwin Girl-]

Present

Me and Rashel walked down the street chatting about our day at school.Rashel was in grade 12 and i was in grade 10. We talked about our teachers, our friends but mostly about our boyfriends. Rashel was so excited about our double date tonight she was almost hopping up and down. We stopped and waited for a car to pass. Suddenly Rashel face went pale. I followed her stare(sp?).There in the middle of the intersection was a transprot that had crashed into a car. Most people would have just walked by it hardly fazing them.But for us it was different.

Past
It was a cool september day.Rashel's and my parents had went out to dinner.they were late but that didn't suprise us.we heard a knock so I went to answer it figuring my parents had forgot there key but when I opened the door my parents weren't there.There stood a avergage height Brunette wearing an police uniform with a frown on her face.She sat us down and told us the news.We learned our parents had had a collision with a transport truck and been instantly killed.We wolud now live with our riding instructor Pat and her husband Chuck.they would be our new parents.

Pressent
I grabbed Rashels hand a squised it.Come on Rashel lets go see mom. I said
Okaky, comming said Rashel.We continued or walk to the lawyers office were mom worked.We needed I ride home to get ready for our double date.When we arrived at the lawyers office we headed back towards the parking lot.We hoped in the old truck and continued chatting about our date. This was Rashel's first date with Zack and my third date with his younger brother Dillan.We were just going to the Embassy in Glencoe.We ahd planned on the palce but mom and dad were eating there.
Mom opened the truck door and made me and Rashel jump so high we banged our heads.mom startes the engine and we were off.
Zack and Dillian arived at eight. Zack was wearin blue jeans and a nice t-shirt with his brown hair messy and Dillian was wearing black jeans and a nice t-shirt with his blonde hockey hair still wet from his shower.Rashel wore some blue jeans with a royal blue tank top with her brown hair pulled back into a high ponytail.I wore a pink halter top with a pair of blue jeans and my brown hair down.Dillian and I hoped in the back of the pickup.Once we were in Rashel hopped in shot gun with Zack driving.Dillian grabed my hand and said You look very beutiful.
Thank you I replied

okayI g2g!Maybe more tommorow.you can critique(sp?) but dont be to rough.

[-Irwin Girl-]

We continued our conversation and so did Rashel and Zack.When we arrived at the resturant we got out of the truck and headed to find a seat.We found a seat at the back corner.The waiter came and gave us our menus and asked what we would like to drink.A few minutes later he came back with four Root Beers.He took our order of one large peperoni pizza.The evenning went very smooth.
We arrived home a little while after nine.Zack gave Rashel a hug while Dillian kissed me.We said our goodbyes and the boys headed for the truck while Rashel and me went to the house. Mom and dad where now pulling up the drive.I finally opened the door just as mom and dad met up with us at the door.Mom, Rashel and me piled on the couch while dad sat on the chair.We turned on the tv and turned the channel to Americas next top model.How was your date?asked mom.
Great!Rashel and me said at the same time.
Thats good said dad.
Shhhh the commercial's over I said.
My head lay on mom's shoulder while we watched the show. After the show we all hugged and said goodnight.Mom and dad wandered to there bedroom as Me and Rashel climbed up to the loft where our bed and Pj's were.After changing me and Rashel climbed into bed.
Rashel and me woke up at our normal time but excited because it was the last day of school and then it was summer.i was really ewited because today Dillian started soccer so I was going to exercise Storm for him.We hurried down the latter.We rushed to the Bathroom.We quickly changed into our barn clothes and ran to the barn.We cleaned stalls and then prepared the morning feeds with mom making them and Rashel and me delivering.Once we were done barn chores Rashel headed for the shower while I headed for the kitchen.Dad was gone to work so I grabed some cheerios.Once I'd finished eating I banged on the bathroom door and yelled Hurry up!Rashel opened the door a few seconds later and headed to the kitchen while I stepped into the shower.
Once I was dried of I slipped on my blue jeans and a green V- neck top.I applied my make-up and brushed my hair.I pulled into a high ponytail.I exited the bathroom and grabbed my backpack. I headed to end of the driveway with Rashel following me.We got there just as the bus pulled up.I stepped onto the bus and headed to the back seat where Dillian was sitting.I sat on the out side next to Dillian.Rashel sat beside Zack and we all drifted into the ushual bus ride.Coulpes sitting close and holding hands and the back four seats talking about how mean the teachers were and how the essays were so hard.
We arived at school and headed for home room.The day whizzed by.Rashel met me outside the main doors and Dillian and Zack showed up to.We headed over to the coffee shop to grab a donut.Zack ran in to grab four donuts and four root beers while we sat on the benches outside.After he came back we all tacked about our date last night and how happy we were it was summer.
Later on once we were finished Dillian and Zack left for Soccer and Rashel and me headed to mom's work.

[-Irwin Girl-]

When we arrived at the truck we hopped in Rashel at the window and me in the middle.I Grabbed my notebook out of my bag.I started drawing courses that I could set up to start riding Storm over.I was hoping to get him to focus on what he was doing and not just fooling around.I had completed two by the time mom was dirving onto the highway.I slid my book back into my bag.We talked about school,work and horses.Mom was just like a best friend we told her everything.Well except Dillian and me kissing but hey we have to have some secrets.
We arrived home and i jumped out and ran for the barn.When I got to the barn I slowed to a fast walk.I quickly set up jumps in the arena.Today was Friday so I didn't have to worry about lesson kids.I hurried to talk up Storm I was so excited.After walking him around the ring I tightened his girth and adjusted the stirrups because Dillian was slightly taller then me.I hoped up and started warming him up.After I warmed him up I did the course.After awhile I put the jumps up to 3ft.After clearing the course I started to cool him down.
After grooming him and ckeaning up the arena I headed inside.Once inside I washed my hands and headed for the kitchen.Something smelled good!I sat down on the couch and cuddled up to mom.We starred waching the end of How its made.Once the show was over we went to put the horses supper in there stalls.mom had made it well I rode and rashel groomed Gizmo and murph.

[-Irwin Girl-]

When we got in we washed our hands.The aroma of chicken filled the air.We fixed our plates.We all took lots of chicken,mixed vegtables and potatoe skins.We all sat down to whach Dirty Jobs.How was your day at work dad?I asked
Good!How was your day at school?asked dad.
Good replied Rashel.
As good as it can get with exams I said.Everyone burst out laughing at my normal sarcasticness.
Can you guys stop laughing the best parts on I said.Everybody looked at the T.V. to see a little dog dancing for his kibbles and bits.This made the laughing start again only harder.
Okay!The shows on now said Rashel.
Shh I said.Mom struggled not to laugh.We all ate watching the T.V.I grabbed the dishes from the table and set them on the counter.
Well your at it you can wash them said mom.
Thanks mom I was just hoping you would ask I said sarcatically.Everyone new I hated doing dishes.But I started running water anyways.A little while later I was putting the last dish away.I happily took my normal spot on the couch thankful it wasn't Thanksgiving.I lay my head on moms shoulders and she wrapped her arms around me.So howd you like riding Storm over the jumps asked mom.
It was great!That horse can fly I said.
Thats good Squeaky said mom.My barn nickname had went from Pat jr to squeaky.The nickname came to me because I talk alot.Okay maybe more than alot.
Do you want a pillow?My shoulders pretty boney asked mom.
No not unless my heads to boney I said
No your fine mom said.
We all gave each other hugs and kisses and said goodnight.Rashel and I followed our normal bedtime routine.We said goodnight and fell into dreams all about horses.

<<5 weeks later>>
I waited for the signal to go.I was at my first Major jumping show on Storm.I was nervous as a singer waiting to take the stage and sing her heart out.They gave us the signal and we cantered toward the Canada flag jump.We flew over it as if it were a trot pole.The rest of the course went the same way.We headed for the last jump.I raised into jumping posstion.Storm skided to a stop.I went flying over his neck and into the rainbow coloured jump.I fell into a wave of Darkness.


haha!Im gonna leave you in suspense!!!hehe

[-Irwin Girl-]

hey!Ill prob add more tmmrw!This is on Rider Utopia too!

[~MISS B.HAVEN~]

LoL since i'm dumb, what does the past present stuff mean at the beginning?

[-Irwin Girl-]

presnet means now.And the past means awhile ago.(in this story Im having a memory!!)

[-Irwin Girl-]

<< 4 weeks later>>

I opened my eyes to see this weird room.I was scared until mom walked into the room.Mom I said.
Omg!!!! yelled mom.
Omg we thought youd never be concious said mom.
Huh?I asked.
You took a major spill at the jumping competition said mom.
All of a sudden i rembered the people, the excitment and the fall but nothing more

[~MISS B.HAVEN~]

Oh ok, duh!!!!

So far I really like it!! More More!

[-Irwin Girl-]

i'd write tonight but im so tired......mybe later!!Glad ya like it!!

[-Irwin Girl-]

<<8 weeks later>>
I sat home waiting for somebody to get home from work or school.i coulndn't go to school because of some stupid reason.Most kids would be heppy but I wasn't.I could ride,date and dance but I couldn't go to school.The stupid doctor!!!I heard the bus stop at the end of our drive.Finally Rashel's home I thought.I watched her come up the drive and then into the house.How much homework do you have?I asked as she set her bag down on the floor.
Not much.Probably 30 minutes worth replied Rashel.
Okay thats better than last night I said.I flipped to the Discovery channel and watched World og Horses while rashel did her Math homework.My mind drifted into day dreaming mode and I was startled when Mom closed the door as she walked in after getting home from work.I jumped and mange to stand up.Once I was out of day dreaming mode I ran a threw my arms around mom.She hugged back.I missed you mom I said.
I missed you to said mom.Once I let go I grabbed my coat and headed to the back door.I slipped on my Winter riding boots well leaning against the door.Mom opened the door and caught me in her arms as I lost my balance.Are you okay asked mom.
yes. I'm fine I replied.

[FreeStyle08]

lets here more. LOL

[[J u m p r g r l ♥]]

Thats really good!!! More, more, more!!!

[-Irwin Girl-]

ooo I havent been updating it at hru!!!LOL joust on elp!!!LOL so stupid!!