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Dec 17, 2007 0:16:09 GMT -5
Post by FreeStyle08 on Dec 17, 2007 0:16:09 GMT -5
ok so one of the things I like to do when i cant sleep is make up poems and here are I few that I have made up that I think came out purty good,
a lot of these dont have names.
I thought you loved me, I thought you trusted me, I told you no you told me to go. I thought i could make it but I didnt succeed, so you left me to lay here to bleed
you asked me to run so I did, but i wasnt fast enough so I didnt win, I though you would keep me but instead you left me on chains were I hung and bled.
sorry my minds going blank on my other poems but I will add them later.
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Dec 19, 2007 14:04:47 GMT -5
Post by ~♥Jesus Freak♥~ on Dec 19, 2007 14:04:47 GMT -5
Wow, deep. I don't even know what to say.... wow. Thats good.
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Dec 19, 2007 15:21:03 GMT -5
Post by FreeStyle08 on Dec 19, 2007 15:21:03 GMT -5
thanks nikki mom said the exact same thing when I read it to her.
here are a couple more.
you asked me to run so I did I wasnt fast enough so I didnt win I though you would keep me but instead you put me on chains were i hung and bled
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-Irwin Girl-
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Jan 22, 2008 16:48:55 GMT -5
Post by -Irwin Girl- on Jan 22, 2008 16:48:55 GMT -5
wow, deep.totally usnure what to say:P
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Jan 22, 2008 19:32:52 GMT -5
Post by [J u m p r g r l ♥] on Jan 22, 2008 19:32:52 GMT -5
Really good JJ!
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Jan 26, 2008 19:23:35 GMT -5
Post by FreeStyle08 on Jan 26, 2008 19:23:35 GMT -5
thanks guys when i cant sleep at night I like to make up poems. this poem I had writen about 1 year ago when I lost one of my best freinds to suiside. so I dedicate this poem to all thoughs that have lost a loved one.
in the night I cant sleep, in the day I sit and weep, I did think you would stay but instead you went away.
RIP Casey we all love you and miss you.
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-Irwin Girl-
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Feb 6, 2008 19:48:42 GMT -5
Post by -Irwin Girl- on Feb 6, 2008 19:48:42 GMT -5
ahh:'(
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Feb 8, 2008 16:03:59 GMT -5
Post by FreeStyle08 on Feb 8, 2008 16:03:59 GMT -5
that was one of my first ones i wrote.
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